|Anonymous wrote, |
on 01-01-03 at 8:12am
now only the you should be bold.
*hugs* Glad to hear you've reworked to make some downtime for yourself and S, darling... you both deserve it, and
at least NEED IT.
As for the piece... hrm... no, it's not you, sweetie, there's a rhythm problem with it. I've gone through it four times now, and still can't nail it down. It's a timing/tempo issue, and it jars somewhere in the last third. I don't know whether that helps, love, but 'm trying. Tempo is probably the biggest problem I have with my own stuff, and why I poke at it while avidly playing cheerleader for you. :p
*hugs and cuddles*