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|RagDoll (profile) wrote, |
on 01-01-03 at 8:17am
|I do like your interpretation, Masque. It does solve some of the pacing problems.
What it doesn't solve is the inherent flaw in what I'd done.
I aced the assignment, No worries. But for people who are loyal to ST, it's not right. Part of the problem is giving Roa internal monolouge at all. She has to be a mystery. People have internal monolouges about Roa, not the other way around. I will rewrite this one in time. I want to keep exploring.