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Star_Gazer05 (profile) wrote,
on 6-19-2003 at 11:57pm
Current mood: artistic
Music: Stupid Girl- Cold
~Untitled~

The water is where I'm meant to be,
with the sand, the sun and the sea.
I long to be there,
alone without a care.
i am able to collect my thoughts,
the things that get me through the day.
I think of my faults,
which in the end i throw away.
Why am I so lost?
is it just how I am?
or am i paying the price,
for not giving a damn?
This is why I come to the beach,
to let go to the feelings inside.
From there I can reach,
because there is nothing to hide.
The sunset is a brillant painting,
of the most viberant colors.
i feel myself fainting,
in the pain of the others.
Intaking the fresh air,
calms the soul.
Releasing the wear and tear
of what the day unfolds.

I'm not quite done with it yet but I will finish soon. I'm learning some things finally. Its just gonna take some time to let it all sink in. Patieces is a virtue...

Jules
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Tanya

06-20-03 3:04pm

nice.
but
'The sunset is a brillant painting,
of the most viberant colors'
doesn't fit where you put it.
words of advice.

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