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| Silently-Broken (profile) wrote, on 11-9-2003 at 5:41pm | |
| Current mood: creative Music: "Eyes on Me" -- Faye Wong Subject: Yay |
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| hrm.. first time I created a community. Probably will be a big flop XD Anyway, this is for people who wanna show off to everyone and brag about how good their poetry ish XP!! j/p j/p, really, this is a place where people can post their poetry and get critiques and whatnot from other people =] Cursing is allowed. I curse a lot anyway lmao. This is also a place where you can post a poem not written by you if you feel it is really well-written. If you do give credit to the author by telling us his/her name before or after the poem. Anyway, one of my poems. Pre-written, but w/e Bask in the shadows of mercy Ride the waves of despair Fall in the pits of doom No one will care Watching happiness is painful For those who are lost Cause being happy and joyful Is a path they yearn to cross Keep all of it inside And let it eat you away The pain killing you slowly A price that you pay Hide the pain with a smile Don't let anyone know The tears building up You can't let them flow You're now but a void Broken and alone But don't let them see it Only happiness is shown Taking all your joy and pride And all emotions too Destroying everything That was uniquely you So how can you win This unbeatable war? Is there actually anything Worth fighting for..? |
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hannaroo1991 | I love your poem!, 11-10-03 11:08pm It is so sad,and yet so full of life!You will go far in the writing buisness.
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