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LoupGarou (profile) wrote,
on 1-10-2004 at 2:50pm
Current mood: chipper
Music: Papercut - Linkin Park
Subject: Ah, it's all over.
The test is all over and I can relax. May I say that I believe I did well on it and I really appreciate all the support I got from everybody. So thanks everyone! COOKIES for people such as Marilyn, Louise, my parents, my tutor, and Alexander aka Little Damion (as if he doesn't have enough cookies already. How far have you gotten on that truck load?)
Anyway, I figured since I'm not so busy I can finally post that poem I wrote a few days ago. I don't have a title for it yet, but if anyone has an idea, I would REALLY appreciate it (especially because coming up with a title for my works is one of my weaknesses when it comes to writing).

Light fades from my eyes
Just as dusk fades to black.
It burns when I inhale,
There's no going back.

I once felt love for you,
Now there's just pain.
My entire body aches
As my last glimmers of joy wane.

I knew all along
It was at me you jeered,
But I chose to ignore it,
Because that's what I feared.

I know now the real you,
You're the one I blame,
Because you're the one who cast this fire,
This burning, searing pain.

And so now I leave you.
You won't be laughing then.
I'll be the one grinning,
Because this time I know I'll win.

And so farewell I say to you
As my own blood gathers on the floor.
You are finally defeated,
Because I'm not afraid anymore.
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And that's my poem *grins sheepishly*. Depressing poems are fun. Especially the ones you write without really knowing the story behind it. Then, once you're finished you look over it and realize that it actually does have a story to it. Tis nice indeed. Well I hope you like, because I enjoyed writing it.
I was drawing on my scratch paper for the test after I had amazingly managed to finish a section early than I did any other, but then they had to collect it in case we took it home and started showing our friends the problems. *sniffle* And it was such a purdy picture too. A chibi version of my character Psyche. Ah, yesh, I love Psyche. He ish my buddy ol' pal.
I was unhealthy today and had McDonald's for lunch. Now I'm full *pats stomach*.
My sister's best friend Justin is over, and right now they're playing video games (my, isn't that a first). I see that Justin has gone from his stage if standing up and jumping while he plays video games to kneeling and wiggling around. An improvement. Oh, wait. He's standing again. And now he's jumping. Forget that thing I said about an improvement.


*waves* BAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!
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LittleDamion

01-10-04 10:50pm

Hope you did well on your test.

Too many cookies...ugh...want more...but too full...you've made me commit gluttony ::passes out::

I really like your poem; it sounds like someone you loved hurt you deeply and made you a stronger person...am I right? Hmmm a good title...I don't know if you'd like it, but "Hardened Love"? I dunno...

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LoupGarou

Re:, 01-10-04 11:25pm

I'm glad you enjoyed the cookies *grins widely*. And thank you so much for the compliments on the poem.
Yes, the poem has that idea to it, but I don't believe I've ever REALLY been put in that position. Wait, nevermind. I have, but it was a long time ago. I don't know. I was just feeling creative.

And thanks for the title idea too! Yes tis a nice one and consider it I most definitely will.
Bai! Tootle pip! Sayonara! Ja ne! etc.

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