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| cutlip (profile) wrote, on 5-7-2004 at 7:02pm | |
| Current mood: accomplished Subject: stumblingfumblingrumblingDOWNTHEHILL |
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| Jack and Jill:Went up the hill:To fetch a pail of w a t e r. Jack fell down:And broke his crown:And Jill came tumbling a f t e r. I wish somebodyanybodysomeTHING would draw this for me. This terrific visual I have of the poem that was far tootoo dirty for leetle cheeldren. A comic. Set in the 19th century perhaps. With button down shirts and peasant blouses and chemises and bodices. YESYESIWANTTHIS. Panel 1: Jack and Jill. Teenagers. Jack is young & young & FARTOOYOUNG to be willing & Jilling. It shows the two standing side by side. He is nubile. She is voluptuous. And holds a wooden BUCKET. "Jack and Jill.." Panel 2: Shadows of the two. A [silent] hill they walk up. An old well at the top. "Went up the hill.." Panel 3: The bucket is on the ground, upside down. Jill's blouse is on top of it. "To fetch a pail of water." Panel 4: Jack looks frightened. Jill's hand is pressing him downwards & his shirt is opened. She is smiling coyly. "Jack fell down.." Panel 5: Jack=orgasmface. Possibly nothing below the chest. "..and broke his crown.." Panel 6: Jill=orgasmface. "..and Jill.." Panel 7: The two. Intercourse. "..came tumbling after." It's genius. I'll sell quadrillions. .. if I could draw. ..and if I were to include the second verse I dunno what I'd do. Probably something about Jack over there having an STD. HELLO EVERYONE. I am [not]enjoying Champagne-flavored Jellosnacks. |
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andy | 05-07-04 10:33pm Your $2.00USD has been received. Thank you. |
cutlip | Re:, 05-09-04 7:04pm No problem. Thanks for lettin' me know. |
crowebasalt | 05-11-04 1:12am hawt. i wish i could draw this for you.
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cutlip | Re:, 05-11-04 1:32am AW. Thank you. It's just something CRAZY inmyhead. For. Yanno. Quatever reezun.
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