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Brad (profile) wrote,
on 12-14-2004 at 2:37pm
Subject: Shit
So set my wooden heart ablaze and send me to my grave.
Fucked up beyond repair
Skin off my wrists I shave
They say that true love never fails, it's never worth the cost
If I can't have you, no one will
They tell me hope is lost
In this lonely room I write
So hidden and forlorn
My ears they hear the Devils cry
He's screaming out for more
Blood drips from my finger tips, and everything goes numb
For my baby, my love, "the one"
It's not over till it's done
I love you more than life itself, I would give anything
Please just tell me that you love me
...It's all I want to hear.
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this-acoustic-love

12-14-04 7:20pm

*tiiiiiiiny bit creepy*
just kidding.

i like the line "So set my wooden heart ablaze and send me to my grave."

but im not sure if "Too fucked up beyond repair" sounds right?
unless you meant;
"Too fucked up, beyond repair."

if not you could say

"Fucked up beyond repair."

overall, I like it.

<3

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Brad

Re:, 12-14-04 7:24pm

heh thanks, better?

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phil-himself

Re: Re:, 12-14-04 7:26pm

or you could be an internet nerd like me and say farked up, only hardcore geeks would get that one

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this-acoustic-love

Re: Re:, 12-14-04 7:28pm

*nods*

see. i told you could write, your structure will get better and better.
*hugs*

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