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kreyz (profile) wrote,
on 2-8-2005 at 1:32pm
Current mood: crazy
Music: Kreyz - Backpack
I finished Backpack. Apparently, I forgot to write the other two verses... The third verse is a free verse, and the fourth is back to the same style verse...

(Chorus)
Killin' everybody in sight with the weapons in my Backpack (4x)

Verse 3
So I bet you al are wondering what is with the random murder and whose gonna be next...
Would it be you, or perhaps even the person sitting next to you?
FUCK NO!
Because I'm after the wrong doing.
The ones that think they're better than everyone else.
Well, Let's see if they still think they're better, when they're dead and gone, burning forever in hell ("hell" Echoes in a cool fashion)

(chorus)

Verse 4
Silence in the night, you know the time is right
Chop swing hack slash when he can't put up a fight
I'm a scrub in this piece, my anger release
Five minutes with this meat cleaver... now? Deceased
I'm a lunatic-tock. The best on my block
Taser you to death. Imagine the shock.
Your eyes melt in your face at a rapid pace
And your soul is then sent to a firey place

(chorus to fade)

I think they're pretty cool, especially that I threw in a free verse in that as well...

Right now, i'm planning on making another song about Marijuana. Its called Puff and Pass. I don't remember how many verses I need to write, but its gonna be a good stoner medley...

Then my final song is gonna be fresh as hell because it has a funtyme feel to it, so thats gonna be good to write. Its a good thing that i'm almost done, because i'm starting to run out of ideas. But the stoner medley and the funtyme song are the last two songs I need to write, so thats all good. Tell me what you think. AND THE SONG FOR THE OTHER ENTRY TOO!
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squish322

02-08-05 4:20pm

i like them both

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Kreyz

Re:, 02-08-05 5:19pm

:-D

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