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brutisimo (profile) wrote,
on 4-7-2005 at 12:31am

she is grey and gone

translucent skin stretched taught

over jutting bones

she smiles at her reflection

through sunken holes

where crystal seas

used to ebb and flow

as she pulls skeletal fingers through

rapidly thinning hair

bangles sing a mournful tune

all the way down to her elbow

she cant hear the words we say

she wont listen

she just smiles ignoring

her clothes reeking

of tears shed as she passes

from room to room

slowly fading

newly revised bitches, do your girl up right!
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04-07-05 10:29am

I like it. It seems darker than something you would normally write. Good visuals.

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04-07-05 11:12am

I like it too, it's very interesting. Good job. :-D

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