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alastar (profile) wrote,
on 7-18-2005 at 6:25pm
Music: A Perfect Circle
Subject: This may hurt a little

Why can't you see
-the world does not revolve around you.
-time does not stop when you need something.

How can't you see
-you are selfish beyond reasoning.
-every mirror wasn't made for you and they are not something to stare at for hours.

Maybe this will manifest a change in you.
After all,
-you knew, even before you read it, that every word would tell a story about you;
Why would I write for anyone else?

Maybe this will be the catalyst for you to change your ways.
Maybe you will crawl off your pedestal,
-and take off your crown.

This was written with your name in mind, and you know it. I'm staring at your picture. The glass is c/r>a/c-k\e>d and the frame is b-r-o-k-e-n.
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wonderbreadland

07-18-05 7:00pm

This was written with your name in mind, and you know it. I'm staring at your picture. The glass is c/r>a/c-k\e>d and the frame is b-r-o-k-e-n.

I keep saying it, and I mean it more everytime: Amazing.

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alastar

Re:, 07-18-05 8:10pm

Haha, I did notice you used that word a lot. Thank you.

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egotrip

07-18-05 8:21pm

Maybe this will be the catalyst for you to change your ways.
Maybe you will crawl off your pedestal,
-and take off your crown.


I really like that. It creates really good imagery. And I liked how you executed the words cracked and broken.

I like it.

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alastar

Re:, 07-18-05 8:32pm

Yeah, I like adding little things like that too my writing. Makes the words stand out more, and I think it looks cool too.

I'm glad you like it, thanks.

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