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| dabestyougot69 (profile) wrote, on 7-29-2005 at 1:38am | |
| Current mood: awake Music: the sound of my screams Subject: my poem...comments? |
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| Emptiness By Kelli T (C) 2005 Emptiness Describes my being Emptiness My only trait Emptiness Who has the meaning? Emptiness My dreadful fate Emptiness is what I feel When I'm walking all alone Emptiness is what I feel When no ones calling on the phone Emptiness is what I feel When you stabbed me in the back Emptiness is what I feel When I'm falling off lifes tracks Emptiness is what I feel When I try to OD you away Emptiness is what I feel When you loved started to fade Emptiness is what I felt When you chose her over me Emptiness is what I felt When you fucked me over completely As empty as that pill bottle That I just emptied out As empty as feeling "love" I thought I knew about As empty as your heart As empty as my soul As empty as your love has been Even when I wanted more Welcome to my suicide party |
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godessalthena | 08-21-05 6:13pm it repeats to the point of monotony... and seems a little melodramatic... it doesn't really get any points arcoss to me except that you're empty, there isn't really any other emotion than factual...
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| dabestyougot69 | Re:, 08-22-05 9:03pm it's cool. I wanted criticism. Apart of life |