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dmlxoxo (profile) wrote,
on 1-9-2006 at 5:46pm
Current mood: crushed
Music: #41
Subject: just something i wrote, exactly how i feel right now....
i sit at the big round table, staring straight into your eyes,
they absorb me, and i get lost in them quickly;
i can never penetrate that poker face.
stiff and still, i trust it always, without reason-
but hope: hope that this will be the time it's worth the risk.
i can only play the cards that i've been dealt.
please see the beauty in what they are.
and if you should win me over, do with them what you will,
but do remember to handle with care.
so many times i've laid my heart out on the table,
diamonds and spades insignificant in the game of love,
nestle it gently among the rest of your hand,
safe and sound- if only the cards weren't to be shuffled.
keep in mind, this is a game: i try to remember
with the queen of hearts in my hand-
"fold, fold, before you lose out, its all or nothing and both come at a cost..."
but somehow to me it's worth the gamble; 100 losses are worth the chances of a single win.
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01-09-06 7:11pm

danielleeee as much as i pick on you, for serious i have always thought you are such a good writer and this proves that so well...i honestly want to print that out and put it in my inspirational book of quotes (...not like i have one hehe)! but for real, round of applause, i greatly enjoyed that and i hope that whatever you are crushed about works out and if you ever wanna talk you know where to find me.

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01-10-06 6:33pm

i like it

a lot

cherrrrrr <3

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