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rina (profile) wrote,
on 4-12-2006 at 1:35am
Current mood: drained
Music: sanctuary - utada hikaru
Subject: battle scenes
she's lost her spark!, they say
as she puts on display
tired eyes from sleepless nights

she sees things backwards
twisted inversely, perhaps nervously
and slowly she admits she's ever-straining

waxing, waning, she's continually changing
gibbous to crescent, always past, never present
she's losing the fight, deciding it's right
to give up, give in; she'll never win.
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michellestar

04-12-06 1:49am

We are similiar.
www.tagworld.com/eagereyes

I like your writing.

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rina

Re:, 04-12-06 10:30am

i quite agree.

and thank you.
no one really stops by here;
sometimes it's good to know the extent of words.

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