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| xsilentxsuicidex (profile) wrote, on 6-17-2005 at 7:28pm | |
| Subject: I found some of my old writings... o.o;; |
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| Constructive criticism, please? Fear As I look into your eyes, all I see is pain, A chill of forsaken fear races down my spine, Why am I scared of you? It's such a shame, Am I scared of what might be going through your mind? I stand- silent The distant sound of rain, I could stay here forever- violent But all I'd feel was pain... And all these things I'm feeling Have all balled up inside Some wounds are beyond healing, I feel so alone... I'm barely alive. I can't hold back these tears That have gathered up all these years... And I don't want you to see The pain it is to be me Diseased This feeling can only be described, As the shadow of something inside of me; A sillhouette of something that died. And I've been here before, too many times. I feel it coursing through me- This poison in my veins. I should be used to it by now, But it's driving me insane. Now I may be young, And I might not know much. But I know what it feels like, When words hurts more than any punch. I know there's got to be something more, But I'm through with searching for the answers. Because I'm sick of this feeling That is spreading through me like a cancer. [Not finished.] Torn Go ahead- Rip me open. Fill the wounds with salt. Watch me stand here- choking, Knowing it's all your fault. Go ahead- Make me bleed to death. Mangle me; pick me apart. And before my one last breath, Visciously lacerate my heart. [Not finished.] Resurrected It's just an urge you can't resist When you place the blade against your wrist The realease it brings is just sweet bliss But the scars you see, they cannot miss... Close your eyes; dissappear. Your thoughts are filled with hate and fear You scream out loud, but no one can hear. Down your cheek rolls a silent tear. This pain is so difficult to fight It's getting hard to sleep at night You feel like nothing you do is right, So just close your eyes, close them tight... You're safe from all of that here... Here in my arms, dear. Meh. Not my best work... But... Bleh. I donno. Comment? |
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moondune22 | 06-17-05 11:36pm nice poems |